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The given circular chart provide the information about the full-time and part-time student services in the university

The given circular chart provide the information about the full-time and part-time student services in the university XlbnY
The assigned circular charts illustrate the views of full-time and part-time students for the services offered by University. At the fleeting glance it is immensely clear that among it support services biggest rank is taken by very satisfied full-time students of 55% as against part time the unaware they existed in small sphere 20% moving to not satisfied catalogue Giri where the smallest slice is not shared by full-time student as against part time learners where they are three times more and registered at the largest size turning to quite satisfied student in both full and part-time the proportion almost identical 32% and 35% respectively moving to the next charts the biggest share is taken by both part time and full time student who were happy with the opening horse as compared to the learner are not at all satisfied with their services nearly 1% full-time students and services may early one full-time student and just 5% in part time among quite happy learners the difference of only bitterness regarding full-time and part-time category 32 and 23% it is clear that most of the student was satisfied with opening officers of the university as compared to the IIT sport
The assigned circular charts illustrate the views of full-time and part-time
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students
for the
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services
offered by University. At the fleeting glance it is
immensely
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clear
that among it support
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services
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biggest
rank
is taken
by
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very
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satisfied
full-time
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students
of 55% as against
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part
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time
the unaware they existed in
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small
sphere 20% moving to not
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satisfied
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catalogue
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Giri
where the smallest slice is not shared by full-time
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student
as against
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part
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time
learners where they are three
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times
more and registered at the largest size turning to quite
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satisfied
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student
in both full and part-time the proportion almost identical 32% and 35%
respectively
moving to the
next
charts the biggest share
is taken
by both
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part
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time
and full
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time
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student
who were happy with the opening horse as compared to the learner are not at all
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satisfied
with their
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services
nearly
1% full-time
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students
and
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services
may early one full-time
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student
and
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just
5% in
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part
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time
among quite happy learners the difference of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
bitterness regarding full-time and part-time category 32 and 23% it is
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clear
that most of the
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student
was
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satisfied
with opening officers of the university as compared to the IIT
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sport
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IELTS academic The given circular chart provide the information about the full-time and part-time student services in the university

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