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chat is about energy consume in AUSTRALIA

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The first pie chart depicts information regarding energy consumption across Australia. The second chart illustrates greenhouse emission, resulting from this energy. This is clearly visible that heating is majorly used in Australia approximately 42%, which was one-sixth of refrigerator usage with 7% only. Water heating was used with nearly 30%. Other appliances, refrigerators, and cooling usage were at a mere 15%, 4%, and 2% respectively. however, water heating generated gas in the vast majority, accounting for 32%. Refrigerator and lighting produce gas nearly 14% and 8%, which is equal to half of its usage. Although coal is the least used energy with roughly 2%, it produced almost 50% gas from To sum up, coal is the least used energy whereas, heating is the main source of energy
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pie chart depicts information regarding
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energy
consumption across Australia. The second chart illustrates greenhouse emission, resulting from this energy.

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visible that
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heating
is
majorly
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in Australia approximately 42%, which was one-sixth of refrigerator usage with 7%
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. Water
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was
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with
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30%. Other appliances, refrigerators, and cooling usage were at a mere 15%, 4%, and 2%
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.

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, water
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generated gas in the vast majority, accounting for 32%. Refrigerator and lighting produce gas
nearly
14% and 8%, which is equal to half of its usage. Although coal is the least
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used
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energy
with roughly 2%, it produced almost 50% gas from

To sum up, coal is the least
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used
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energy
whereas,
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is the main source of
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energy
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IELTS academic chat is about energy consume in AUSTRALIA

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