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What is your favorite sport?

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Among different popular sports, I like swimming best because it helps me reduce stress and truly works my entire body. When it comes to stress, swimming can reduce anxiety and depression. In fact, I will go for a swim at the pool or at sea whenever I feel stress or get a lot in my mind. Thank to that, I can get back to my work without anxiety and maintain a positive mental attitude. Besides making my stress go away, swimming allows me to use my entire body when practicing by providing a variety of swimming styles such as butterfly, backstroke, breaststroke, etc. By practicing different style of swimming, I can use all of my muscle to move my body through the water, so I am always able to keep my body in the best state. In conclusion, I am really fond of swimming as it help me to relieve the stress and keep my body in the best state.
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, swimming can
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anxiety and depression. In fact, I will go for a swim at the pool or at sea whenever I feel
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a lot in my mind. Thank to that, I can
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back to my work without anxiety and maintain a
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go away, swimming
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my entire
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when practicing by providing a variety of swimming styles such as butterfly, backstroke, breaststroke, etc. By practicing
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different
style of swimming, I can
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all of my muscle to
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my
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through the water,
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in the best state.

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IELTS academic What is your favorite sport?

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160 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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