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The table gives detailed information about the UK unemployed genders spent their time in the morning and afternoon in 1982.

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The table gives detailed information about the UK unemployed genders spent their time in the morning and afternoon in 1982. Obviously, the highest percentage belonged to housework women who spent their time in the morning in the year 1982. As can see from the table, housework, shopping, job hunting, and visiting friends and relatives had the highest amounts of spent times for women gender which unemployed, additionally, in comparison, the other columns the women who spent their times in the morning had the most percentage and it can be known for an indicator of the table by 49%. In conclusion, housework and shopping was the main work that both genders spent their time in the morning, and as regards job hunting, the possibility that the genders be an employed person in the morning was more than in the afternoon.
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had the most percentage and it can
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, and as regards job hunting, the possibility that the genders be an employed person in the
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was more than in the afternoon.
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