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The chart below shows number of incidents and injuries

The chart below shows number of incidents and injuries Joa7B
chart indicating the numbers of events and injuries by transportation type in 2002. The unit in the graph is per 100 million passengers traveled (PMT). Overall, it is clear that injuries are always remaining below incidents. Both parameters are highest for demand response and lowest in commuter rail. The difference between incidents and injuries is highest in demand response and commuter rail also. The incidents are highest in demand response greater than 250 PMT and lowest in commuter rail. Incidents in heavy rail are larger than commuter rail. The value of PMT is approximately similar for the light rail and for the bus ( approx 75 PMT). In the case of demand response, it is above then 250 PMT. On the contrary, injuries for commuter rail are about the same as incidents. For heavy rail, it is higher than commuter rail and light rail is about the same as it (approx 10<35<38 PMT). The injuries are for the bus is above 50 PMT. In demand response, it is far beyond others. The value of injuries for demand response is greater than 150 PMT.
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indicating the numbers of
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by transportation type in 2002. The unit in the graph is per 100 million passengers traveled (PMT).

Overall
, it is
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clear
that
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injuries
are always remaining below
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incidents
. Both parameters are highest for
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demand
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response
and lowest in
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commuter
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rail
. The difference between
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incidents
and
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is highest in
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demand
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response
and
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commuter
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rail
also
.

The
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are highest in
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demand
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response
greater than 250 PMT and lowest in
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commuter
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rail
.
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Incidents
in heavy
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rail
are larger than
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commuter
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rail
. The value of PMT is approximately similar for the light
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rail
and for the bus
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approx 75 PMT). In the case of
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demand
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response
, it is above then 250 PMT.

On the contrary
,
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injuries
for
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commuter
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are about the same as
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. For heavy
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rail
, it is higher than
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commuter
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rail
and light
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rail
is about the same as it (approx 10<35<38 PMT). The
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injuries
are for the bus is above 50 PMT. In
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demand
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response
, it is far beyond others. The value of
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injuries
for
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demand
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response
is greater than 150 PMT.

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