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The graph shows the number of crime committed in Manchester City from 2003 to 2012. Summarize

The graph shows the number of crime committed in Manchester City from 2003 to 2012. Summarize JoaGB
The given graph illustrate the changes in three categories of offense in a certain city in the United Kingdom over a period of nine years starting from 2003. Overall, it is clear on the graph that, burglary, which was the most prevalent form of crime in the beginning of the given time saw a significant decline by the end of the stipulated period. However, there wasn't any clear change in the number of offenses in respect to robbery though there were some fluctuations throughout the period. In 2003, there were about 3400 of burglary in Manchester City. This was followed by car theft with a figure of about 2300. There was a small increase in burglary in the following year before it saw a dramatic decline to it's lowest point in the year 2008 with nearly 1000 committed crime. It then levelled off till the end of the whole period. Comparatively, crime rate relating to car theft rose to nearly 3000 in the year 2012. Robbery, which was the least committed crime didn't didn't see much change. The highest it recorded was in 2005 with a figure slightly above 1000. Nonetheless, there were flactuations through the period.
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in three categories of offense in a certain city in the United Kingdom over a
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of nine years starting from 2003.
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, it is
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clear
on the graph that, burglary, which was the most prevalent form of
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crime
in the beginning of the
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time
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a significant decline by the
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end
of the stipulated
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.
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, there wasn't any
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clear
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in the number of offenses in respect to robbery though there were
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some
fluctuations throughout the
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. In 2003, there were about 3400 of burglary in Manchester City. This
was followed
by car theft with a figure of about 2300. There was a
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increase in burglary in the following
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year
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before
it
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a dramatic decline to
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it's lowest point
in the
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2008 with
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1000 committed
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crime
. It then levelled off till the
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end
of the whole
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.
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,
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rate relating to car theft rose to
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3000 in the
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2012. Robbery, which was the least committed
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didn't
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much
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. The highest it recorded was in 2005 with a figure
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IELTS academic The graph shows the number of crime committed in Manchester City from 2003 to 2012. Summarize

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