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The map below shows the development of the Irelend between 20 years ago and present.

The map below shows the development of the Irelend between 20 years ago and present. MMXnL
The illustrated two maps represent now and 20 years ago Ireland. It is apparently seen that Irlend dramatically changed, moreover, some new buildings added to it like skyscrapers and residential areas, while, old places still exist. In the past, there were only few places for instance in the northern part of the city there were hills, river and a bridge, also, in the eastern part has been seen some residential areas, church and pond, furthermore, a farm and some field are located in the center of city. New Irlened has developments. A motorway through the city, in addition, residential areas were expanded and stayed on near to church and skyscrapers situated next to them, moreover, a hospital has been built just south of the river, as well as, a new stadium was constructed east of hills. To sum up, modern Ireland is made with new features.
The illustrated two maps represent
now
and 20 years ago Ireland. It is
apparently
seen
that
Irlend
dramatically
changed
,
moreover
,
some
new buildings
added
to it like skyscrapers and residential areas, while,
old
places
still
exist.

In the past, there were
only
few places
for instance
in the northern part of the city there were hills, river and a bridge,
also
, in the eastern part has been
seen
some
residential areas, church and pond,
furthermore
, a farm and
some
field
are located
in the center of city.

New
Irlened
has developments. A motorway through the city,
in addition
, residential areas
were expanded
and stayed on near to church and skyscrapers situated
next
to them,
moreover
, a hospital has
been built
just
south of the river,
as well
as, a new stadium
was constructed
east of hills.

To sum up, modern Ireland
is made
with new features.
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IELTS academic The map below shows the development of the Irelend between 20 years ago and present.

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4 paragraphs
146 words
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