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The table given illustrates how many cars were manufactured in different three countries, namely Argentina, Australia and Thailand over a course of 6 years staring from 2003.

The table given illustrates how many cars were manufactured in different three countries, namely Argentina, Australia and Thailand over a course of 6 years staring from 2003. PknQJ
The table given illustrates how many cars were manufactured in different three countries, namely Argentina, Australia and Thailand over a course of 6 years staring from 2003. Overall, the largest produced cars belonged to Thailand over the period. In addition, the figure car manufactured in Thailand and Argentina experienced an upward trend whereas the opposite trend was true for Australia during the period shown. In 2003, 735, 852 cars were made in Thailand, substantially higher than in the Australia, standing at 452, 163 cars. Conversely, the figure for cars produced in Argentina was merely around a third of the that for Thailand and nearly a half of that of Australia, at 235, 008 cars. Over the following 6 years, Thailand still remained the highest position in car manufacturing among the three countries. Their car production soared to 1, 162, 356 cars in 2005 before declinning marginally to virtually 1, 000, 000 cars in 2009. Similarity, the quantity of cars created in Argentina witnessed a gradual growth throughout the period to 466, 089 cars, which made them become the second biggest car production in last year. In term of Australia, however, the figure for cars decreased to merely 250, 000 by the end of the period
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belonged to Thailand over the
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manufactured in Thailand and Argentina experienced an upward trend whereas the opposite trend was true for Australia during the
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shown. In 2003, 735, 852
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produced in Argentina was
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manufacturing among the three countries. Their
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production soared to 1, 162, 356
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in 2009. Similarity, the quantity of
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created in Argentina witnessed a gradual growth throughout the
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to 466, 089
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, which made them become the second biggest
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production in last year. In term of Australia,
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IELTS academic The table given illustrates how many cars were manufactured in different three countries, namely Argentina, Australia and Thailand over a course of 6 years staring from 2003.

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