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The bar chart provides information about the prevalence of household car ownerships in four different age ranges in The Chinese from 2010 until 2014.

The bar chart provides information about the prevalence of household car ownerships in four different age ranges in The Chinese from 2010 until 2014. q1DYw
The bar chart provides information about the prevalence of household car ownerships in four different age ranges in The Chinese from 2010 until 2014. Overall, every age group had experienced an upward trend for the last four years, with the most outstanding number in 2014, which was occupied by the youngest age groups; on the other hand, the least common age population went through by the 46-55s. From the figures, it was obvious that the youngest adult age group, as well as the late adult age ranges, had a similar pattern, which had undergone a significant growth from year to year. At the beginning of the period, the 18-19 age groups started with approximately 20% and were over doubled in the final term, after encountering dramatic changes in 2013. While the 46-55 initiated with around 15% and then rose to two-thirds percent in 2012 until it doubled in 2014. In terms of the 30-45 and the 56-55, both of them had constant growth in the first couple of years with approximately 20% in the first year of each respectively. In 2013, there was a dramatic increase of three-fourths from the previous year, and continually stable in 2014 for the 30-45s. Meanwhile, the oldest age group had grown gradually by 2012 and rose significantly to 35%, which was a seventy-five percent increase at the end of the year.
The bar chart provides information about the prevalence of household car
ownerships
in four
different
age
ranges in The Chinese from 2010 until 2014.

Overall
, every
age
group
had experienced an upward trend for the last four years, with the most outstanding number in 2014, which
was occupied
by the youngest
age
groups
;
on the other hand
, the least common
age
population went through by the 46-55s.

From the figures, it was obvious that the youngest adult
age
group
,
as well
as the late adult
age
ranges, had a similar pattern, which had undergone a significant growth from
year
to
year
. At the beginning of the period, the 18-19
age
groups
started
with approximately 20% and were over doubled in the final term, after encountering dramatic
changes
in 2013. While the 46-55 initiated with around 15% and then rose to two-thirds percent in 2012 until it doubled in 2014.

In terms of the 30-45 and the 56-55, both of them had constant growth in the
first
couple of years with approximately 20% in the
first
year
of each
respectively
. In 2013, there was a dramatic increase of three-fourths from the previous
year
, and
continually
stable in 2014 for the 30-45s. Meanwhile, the oldest
age
group
had grown
gradually
by 2012 and rose
significantly
to 35%, which was a seventy-five percent increase at the
end
of the
year
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart provides information about the prevalence of household car ownerships in four different age ranges in The Chinese from 2010 until 2014.

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  American English
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227 words
6.5
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