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The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. kYYw8
The provided tabular data illustrates the details of temperature and daylight time in two different cities, London and Sydney  during the last weekend of December 2018. Overall, it can be seen that time of sunrise and sunset of both the cities has gone late from friday to sunday. On the other hand, maximum and minimum temperatures of Sydney were higher than London. To begin with, on the 28th December 2018, maximum temperature of London was 9°C and minimum temperature was 4°C which were quite lower than Sydney on the same day. After fluctuation, maximum and minimum temperatures of London increased by 1°C on sunday. On the other side, in Sydney, maximum temperature on sunday was 31°C and minimum temperature was 19°C which were higher than friday. Apart from that, sunrise in London happened at 8. 05 while sunset on the same day occurred at 15. 57. On the contrary, sunrise in Sydney happened earlier than London on 28th December 2018; whereas, sunset occurred at 20. 06 which was late than London on the same day. In the both cities, sunset and sunrise went late by 1 minute on sunday of last weekend on December 2018.
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during the last weekend of December 2018.

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that time of sunrise and
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of both the cities has gone late from
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of Sydney were higher than London.

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with, on the 28th December 2018, maximum
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of London was
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and
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was
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which were quite lower than Sydney on the same day. After fluctuation, maximum and
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of London increased by
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. On the other side, in Sydney, maximum
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which were higher than
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Apart from that, sunrise in London happened at 8. 05 while
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on the same day occurred at 15. 57.
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occurred at 20. 06 which was
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than London on the same day. In the both cities,
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and sunrise went late by 1 minute on
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of last weekend on December 2018.

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