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The picture below shows Bell Hill farm in 7976 and the changes that took placein2006.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemain features and make conparison where relevant.

The picture below shows Bell Hill farm in 7976 and the changes that took placein2006. Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemain features and make conparison where relevant. 85aMw
The given map shows the Bell Hill farm in 1976 and the changes that took place over a period of thirty years. It can be seen that the farm was transformed into an Environment Centre by 2006. In 1976, there was a farmyard in the centre, which was rePlaced by a recreational area by 2006. The barn in which com etc. was stored in 1976 was replaced by a multimedia room in 2006. The storage for farm machinery on the northwest was converted into a car parking area. The larmhouse on the south side was not changed at all. The cow-sheds u"a po""ft y area on the east were converted into student housing' The roads on the west were also not altered and remained as they wete in "1976' Therefore, it can be seen that the Bell Hill farm of 1976 underwent a complete transformation and became an Environmental Centre over a period of three decades.
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IELTS academic The picture below shows Bell Hill farm in 7976 and the changes that took placein2006. Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemain features and make conparison where relevant.

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