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The graphs show enrolment in different colleges in the higher colleges of technology in 1999.

The graphs show enrolment in different colleges in the higher colleges of technology in 1999. RNklW
The graph provide information about higher college of technology graduates in 1999. Overall, The highest enrolment college is dubai women’s as well as lowest is Ras Al Khaimah mans. There are totally ten collages they are firstly, al ain men's are 131 graduates, secondly al ain woman's are 218 following that abu Dhabi men's are 273, abh Dhabi women's are 193. Fifth one is Dhabi men's college there are 426 graduates after that Dubai women's 547. This is the highest higher colleges of technology in 1999. Up to these one bu one collages are increasing. Following the bigger college Dubai women's next one is Ras al khaimah men's are only 102 graduates compared to all colleges rascal khaimah men's are the lowest after that ras al khaimah women's are 187. The ninth college is sharjah men's are 165. Thee e 86 graduates in sharjah women's college. As I observed from the graph women's enrolment is more in higher college of technology in 1999.
The graph provide information about higher college of technology
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ain
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are 131
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secondly
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ain woman's are 218 following that
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abu Dhabi
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are 273,
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Dhabi
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are 193. Fifth one is
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Dhabi
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men's
college there are 426
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after that Dubai
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547. This is the highest higher colleges of technology in 1999. Up to these one
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Following the bigger college Dubai
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next
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Ras
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khaimah
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102
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compared to all colleges rascal
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khaimah
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are the lowest after that
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ras
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al
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khaimah
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women's
are 187. The ninth college is
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sharjah
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are 165. Thee e 86
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As
I observed from the graph
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women's
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enrolment
is more in higher college of technology in 1999.

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