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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Kwwb6
The given line graph illustrates the number of foreign visitors who came to the Uk for business, holiday and meeting friends and relatives from 1989 to 2009. Overall holiday is the highest 9 millions visitors in 2009. Whereas business is steadily increase to the decrease 8 million visitors in 2009. When meeting friends and relatives is the upward trend to downward for 7 millions visitors in 2009. In 1989 meeting friends and relatives is the begin 3. 5 millions visitors up to the steadily increased since 2009 but then after decrease 6 million visitors in after 2009. Business is the begin with 5 million visitors in 2009 then after slowly decrease up to 4 million visitors but steadily increase to the 8 million visitors in 2009 but then after decrease 7 million visitors in 2009. Holiday is begin with 6. 5 million visitors in 1989 then after increased to the 9 million visitors between 1994 to 1999. Whereas decrease 6. 5 million visitors in 2004 but steadily increase to the 9 million visitors in after 2009.
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line graph illustrates the number of foreign
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visitors
who came to the
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Uk
for business, holiday and meeting friends and relatives from 1989 to 2009.
Overall
holiday is the highest 9
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millions
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visitors
in 2009.
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business is
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steadily
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increase
to the
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decrease
8
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million
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visitors
in 2009. When meeting friends and relatives is the upward trend to downward for 7
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millions
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visitors
in 2009. In 1989 meeting friends and relatives is the
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begin
3. 5
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millions
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visitors
up to the
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steadily
increased since 2009
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then after
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decrease
6
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million
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visitors
in after 2009. Business is the
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begin
with 5
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million
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visitors
in 2009 then after
slowly
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decrease
up to 4
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million
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visitors
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steadily
increase to the 8
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million
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visitors
in 2009
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but
then after
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decrease
7
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million
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visitors
in 2009. Holiday is
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begin
with 6. 5
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million
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visitors
in 1989 then after increased to the 9
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visitors
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decrease
6. 5
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million
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visitors
in 2004
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but
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steadily
increase to the 9
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million
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visitors
in after 2009.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009.

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