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The chat below give information about Southland's main exports in 2000,2020and future projections for 2025.

The chat below give information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2020and future projections for 2025. J9y5

The illustrated bar graph shows the export of Southland's information in 2000, 2020and 2025 which is based on future prediction. Overall, the year contains the different export field information which is international tourism, daily product and meal product. As we can see, the international tourism export is toward upward direction from approximately 8 to 10 billion respectively. In addition to, in the dairy products, nearly 6 billion product are transferred in 2000 and the highest Export is in year 2020. A dramatically fall in downward direction is in meal product. there are highest Export in 2000 and then it decrease dramatically from 6 to 5 billion in 2000 to 2025

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 of Southland's information in 2000, 2020and 2025 which is based
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 and meal product.

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