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the chart below show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009

the chart below show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 PebE

The presented circle graphs delineate the proportion of travelers using five distinct modes of transport to commute to university in two specific years 2004 and 2009. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Overall, usage of cars dramatically fell in the given time frame while all other types witnessed considerable surge in the preference by the people. It is perspicuous that in the former year, around one third of the people choose bus to travel and after 5 years the percentum marked gradual increase from 33 to 46 percent, making it highly used transport medium in 2009. Even, 16 percent commuters opted for bicycle in the latter year in contrast to 9 percent individuals in the year 2004. In addition to this, slight increase was observed in the utilization of train and going through foot, the ratio increased from 3 to 4 and from 4 to 6 respectively. However, the tendency to use cars noticed a great drop, more than half of the people used cars in the former year whereas the fraction declined to about 28 after five years period.

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