Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The chart below give information on the ages of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below give information on the ages of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. b06l
The given pie chart illustrates the data related to ages of populations in the year 2000 and predicted year 2050 for Yemen and Italy. Overall, it is observed that, The 15-59 years of humans have a high amount of population in both the countries. However, In Yemen half of the population is covered by 0-14 years of age population in 2000 whereas there will be a decrease of 13% in the year 2050. Similarly, the 15-59 years age of humans have almost covered the other half of the population that is 46. 3% while leading it to a steady increase in the predicted year by 11 percent. There is also a small amount of rise in 60+ years from 3. 6% in 2000 to 5. 7% in 2050. Alternatively, In Italy the quarter part of the population is been covered by 15-59 years of age group leading to a predicted significant decrease of 15% in 2050. whereas the 60+ years of humans has acquired 24. 1% in 2000, as projected it has chances of getting doubled in the year 2050. Leaving it to 0-14 age group, it is likely to get decrease by 3% in 2050 as compared to the year 2000.
The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
pie chart illustrates the data related to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ages
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
populations
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
2000 and predicted
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
2050 for Yemen and Italy.
Overall
, it
is observed
that, The 15-59 years of humans have a high amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
population
in both the countries.

However
, In Yemen half of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
population
is covered
by 0-14 years of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
population
in 2000 whereas there will be a decrease of 13% in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
2050.
Similarly
, the 15-59 years
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
of humans have almost covered the other half of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
population
that is
46. 3% while leading it to a steady increase in the predicted
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
by 11 percent. There is
also
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
amount of rise in 60+ years from 3. 6% in 2000 to 5. 7% in 2050.

Alternatively
, In Italy the quarter part of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
population
is been
covered by 15-59 years of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
group leading to a predicted significant decrease of 15% in 2050.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
whereas
the 60+ years of humans has acquired 24. 1% in 2000, as projected it has chances of getting doubled in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
2050. Leaving it to 0-14
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
group, it is likely to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
decrease by 3% in 2050 as compared to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
2000.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The chart below give information on the ages of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
202 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts