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The table give information about the average hours spent per week in front of the computèrs in China

The table give information about the average hours spent per week in front of the computèrs in China XqJEP

The rendered table depicts the average hours spent per week in front of computer by individuals of different age groups in China. Initially, the graph illustrates the highest number of computer users those aged between 16 and 20, with figure for males being 24 hours and for females less than one. In younger age group, boys show much interest in internet as compared to girls, which recorded for 10 hours for boys and 8 hours for girls. The both genders demonstrate the dramatic decrease in the given next age group from 21 to 25, which is 12 hours for males and 10 hours for females. Apart from that, between 26 to 30 years old the both categories are shared same hours, which is 9 for each. In following age group from 31 to 50, women are stable at 9 hours but men are decreased slightly at 8 hours. At the final group, these genders show their less amount of time for using computers are aged 51 or older. Having an overview, a cursory glance over a table is enough io evident that males and females of aged between 16 and 20 are the highest users of computer. It is also seen that females younger than 31 spent less time than males on the internet.

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