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The archaeological survey of West Labab and Goz Mari villages, Northern Sudan

The archaeological survey of West Labab and Goz Mari villages, Northern Sudan 0E1lG

The site known locally as Wad Nimeri fort, covered territory of about 2km2 that is remains of an ancient fort built of sandstone, mud brick and Rocks, overlooking the Nile (map 1). The fortress contained many foundation of buildings around it, along with a lot of material covering the surface such as ceramic, Blokes- beads, etc (Hussein: 2016). Numbers of travelers had lifted information about this site suchas (Crawford: 1951), (Bellefonds: 1958), (Cailliaud: 1826), (Alkarkuki: 1914). Besides, some modern scholars at the beginning of this centuries were mention the site (Edwardes: 1989), (Adems: 1984), (ELzein: 2008- 2010-2011), and (Babiker: 2008). Most of collected material was ceramic. The ceramic collections from the site was set into two groups for comparison purposes. The first must be mix between Christian and early Islamic ceramic (fig 4) can dated back to 14th -19th centuries (Philips: 2004: fig1- B, 3-B, 6- ). The second comprises of glazes ceramics and dated back between 9th-16th Centuries (fig 3). This materials were found in many different archaeological sites in Nubia (Egypt – Fustat- Qasr ibrim- Qasr el-wiz etc) and Old Dongola (Danys: 2018. Fig17. 3: A & 17. 5: B & 17. 6: A). E). according to the oral narrative of the local people lives in the villages there the fortress was served for many purposes, firstly as a port for ships coming from Karima between1980-1990 (Ali Hussein: oral narrative: 2016), and today as agricultural land especially the east part of the fort.

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