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The chart below shows the annual profit made by four major international companies in 2011, 2012, 2013, and 2014. [ABC 10, Mega Market, Grow&Flow, Today Global].

The chart below shows the annual profit made by four major international companies in 2011, 2012, 2013, and 2014. [ABC 10, Mega Market, Grow&Flow, Today Global]. w3En

we can see that the profits of ABC10 company (the blue colour) are increasing throughout the range of years, reaching their peak in 2014. Except for ABC10, all profits drop in 2014 which could be the outcome of the global economy getting worse and worse. In 2013, all companies performed better than 2012. “Although the ABC10 company earned much less money in 2011 compared to MegaMarket and TodayGlobal, it steadily increased its income becoming the most profitable of all in 2014. ” Additionally, you can say that “MegaMarket and Grow+Flow earn more or less the same amount of money from 2012-14. ”

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) are increasing throughout the range of years, reaching their peak in 2014.

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Except for
 ABC10, all profits drop in 2014 which could be the outcome of the global economy getting worse and worse.

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companies
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MegaMarket
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TodayGlobal
, it steadily
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 and Grow+Flow earn more or less the same amount of money from 2012-14. ”