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The line graph illustrates the number of people visiting a specific island of the Caribbean over a period of 7 years from 2010 to 2017.

The line graph illustrates the number of people visiting a specific island of the Caribbean over a period of 7 years from 2010 to 2017. qNxE
The line graph illustrates the number of people visiting a specific island of the Caribbean over a period of 7 years from 2010 to 2017. Overall, the total number of visitor paying visit to the island escalated dramatically over the given time span. In addition, the number of visitors staying on the cruise ships increased substantially over the years, while the visitor staying on the island exhibit a fluctuated behavior. In regard to the total number of people visiting the Caribbean island stands at 1 million in 2010 which shows to exactly three million in the last year. On the other hand, the visitor who remained on the island started at 0. 8 million in 2010 which then grew to a high of 1. 5 million and remained steady for three years previously fluctuating in 2016 for the last time.
The line graph illustrates the
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of the Caribbean over a period of 7 years from 2010 to 2017.
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paying visit to the
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escalated
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staying on the cruise ships increased
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staying on the
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exhibit a fluctuated behavior.

In regard to the total
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visiting the Caribbean
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stands at 1
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million
in 2010 which
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to exactly three
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in the last
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.
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who remained on the
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started
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in 2010 which then grew to a high of 1. 5
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and remained steady for three years previously fluctuating in 2016 for the last time.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the number of people visiting a specific island of the Caribbean over a period of 7 years from 2010 to 2017.

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