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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. q2Kw
The chart illustrates the proportions of takeaways eaten in Melbourne in year 2005, present and 2025 respectively. The five different kinds of consumed processed food in the said city are hamburgers, fried chicken, salad, fried rice and noodles. A glance at the graph reveals that there are more hamburgers and fried chicken that were pig out on three different times. On the other hand the least of these products are fried rice and noodles. However, salad consistenly increased in portions from year 2005 to 2025. First of all, it is clear that burgers and fried chicken are the type of food that were mostly eaten up in the city with 40 and 35 units individually in year 2005. Turning to the data at present, it slightly drop to 38 and 37 units. however it can be seen that in year 2025 the repective portions climbed up to 51 and 41 in values. As for the fried rice and noodles, it shows almost the same amount of consumers. On year 2005, both of the products has 6 parts each while at present it accounted to 8 and 9 units. At year 2025 the fried rice has the same amount of consumer at 9 portions while noodles have increased to 9 parts from the value of 8 units. The main thing that can be observe here is that salad had dramatically increased in units in three different occasions from 5, 15 and 41 units respectively.
The chart illustrates the proportions of takeaways eaten in Melbourne in
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2005, present and 2025
respectively
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The five
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kinds of consumed processed food in the said city are hamburgers,
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chicken, salad,
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fried
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rice
and
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noodles
. A glance at the graph reveals that there are more hamburgers and
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fried
chicken that were pig out on three
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different
times.
On the other hand
the least of these products are
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fried
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rice
and
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noodles
.
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, salad
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consistenly
increased in portions from
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2005 to 2025.

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, it is
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that burgers and
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chicken are the type of food that were
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eaten up in the city with 40 and 35
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units
individually
in
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year
2005. Turning to the data at present, it
slightly
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to 38 and 37
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however
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2025 the
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portions climbed up to 51 and 41 in values.

As for the
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and
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, it
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almost the same amount of consumers. On
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2005, both of the products has 6 parts each while at present it accounted to 8 and 9
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units
. At
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2025 the
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fried
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rice
has the same amount of consumer at 9 portions while
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have increased to 9 parts from the value of 8 units.

The main thing that can be
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here is that salad had
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in three
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occasions from 5, 15 and 41
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respectively
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IELTS academic The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

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