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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. KDPN

The table reveals the information about the consumption of fast food in Melbourne in the year 2005, present, 2025. The data has been given in units. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that hamburger was popular food in the past and it gives popularity in present. Moreover the popularity of hamburger will be continue in the future also while salads were the least consumed food in the past and noodles and French fries will be consumed less in future. It can be clearly seen that hamburger and fried chicken were consumed more in the year 2005, amounting to around 40 units and 35 units respectively. In present, these two are nearly same are 38 units and 37 units. The consumption of hamburgers and fried chicken will remain popular in future with 51 and 45 units. Further more, the salads but the least consumed food by the people of Melbourne in the past was five units which will be increased dramatically 241 units in the upcoming years. Fried rice and noodles were consumed seen in the past or six units and will remain continue in the future the quantity will be seen 9 units.

The table reveals the information about the consumption of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
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food
 in Melbourne in the year 2005, present, 2025. The data has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 in units.

Looking from an overall
 perspective, it is readily
 apparent that hamburger was popular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
 and it gives popularity in present. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 the popularity of hamburger will be Consider using the past participle "continued"?continued
continue
 in the future also
 while salads were the least You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhaustexpenddominateeat upabsorbpreoccupy
consumed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
 and noodles and French fries will be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhaustexpenddominateeat upabsorbpreoccupy
consumed
 less Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
.

It can be clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that hamburger and fried chicken were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhaustexpenddominateeat upabsorbpreoccupy
consumed
 more in the year 2005, amounting to around 40 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
units
 and 35 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
units
respectively
. In present, these two are nearly
 same are 38 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
units
 and 37 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
units
. The consumption of hamburgers and fried chicken will remain popular in future with 51 and 45 units.

Further
 more, the salads This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the least You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhaustexpenddominateeat upabsorbpreoccupy
consumed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of Melbourne in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
 was five You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
units
 which will be increased
dramatically
 241 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
units
 in the upcoming years. Fried rice and noodles were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhaustexpenddominateeat upabsorbpreoccupy
consumed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
 or six You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
units
 and will remain continue in the future the quantity will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 9 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
units
. 