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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. BADm
The five major types of fast foods eaten in melbourne are Hamburger, Fries chicken, Salad, Fried Rice, Noodles. The most consumed food in melbourne in 2005 is Hamburger. Around 40 units is consumed. but, at present the consumption of hamburger is declined to 38. But, to 2025 consumpution is grown rapid to 51 units. The top second eaten food is Fried chicken. The units are keep on increasing from 2005 to 2025 as 35, 37, 45. The least consuming food is Noodles where only 6 units is taken in 2005 and we don't see drastic changes to 2025 even. The chinese food Fried Rice, Noddles are a way shows a close figures. But the consumption of Salad at 2005 is only of 5 units. But there is a drastic change from 2005 to 2025 where 41 units are consumed. And at present 15 units are eaten. Overall consumption of fast foods in melboune are increased from 2005 to 2025. Only the Hamburger consumption at present is decreased about 2 units. Rest of all the fast foods consumption at present is slightly increased cmpared to 2005.
The five major types of
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are Hamburger, Fries chicken, Salad, Fried Rice, Noodles. The most consumed
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in 2005 is Hamburger. Around 40
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The top second eaten
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6
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15
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Overall
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