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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. PJew
The bar graph provides information about the number of social networking sites used by citizens in Canada between 2014 and 2015. The data is in the percentage. Overall, it is seen clearly from the given bar chart that two or more social sites, which used by people in Canada increased, while people who used only one social site, which decreased in a given period. In 2014, there were more than 20% of people, who do not use any social media sites in Canada, which declined slightly 1% in the next year. 36% of users on one social platform site in 2014, which decreased to 28% in the following year. Moreover, people who used two sites were increased by nearly 1% in 2015 as compared with their past. Furthermore, in 2014, there were around 12%, 5%, and 2% of people, who used three, four, and five social sites in Canada. The users of three, four, and five social sites rose sharply by 4%, 3%, and 2% in 2015.
The bar graph provides information about the number of
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by citizens in Canada between 2014 and 2015. The data is in the percentage.

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, it is
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seen
clearly
from the
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bar chart that two or more
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social
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sites
, which
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used
by
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in Canada increased, while
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people
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who
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only
one
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, which decreased in a
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period.

In 2014, there were more than 20% of
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,
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do not
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any
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media
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in Canada, which declined
slightly
1% in the
next
year. 36% of users on one
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platform
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site
in 2014, which decreased to 28% in the following year.
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,
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people
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used
two
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were increased
by
nearly
1% in 2015 as compared with their past.

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, in 2014, there were around 12%, 5%, and 2% of
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,
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three, four, and five
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social
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sites
in Canada. The users of three, four, and five
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rose
sharply
by 4%, 3%, and 2% in 2015.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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