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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. 03PB

These two graphs give information about the participation of foreign and native students at universities in Australia for ten years. In general, the number of total foreign student who enrolled at university in Australia is marginally above native students. The number of overseas student who apply in Australia's university is gradually increased throughout the year. While the number of local student increased and remained static. Local college student started in total of exactly 400000 students and kept increasing from year to year, and finally reached it peak at 600000 students in 2007 and remained the same amount until the end of final year. On the other hand, overseas students who came to Australia to study in college started with total of 200000 students in 2001. From 2004 the students kept increasing from year to year and reached 600000 college students in 2007. However the number jumped to 800000 students and hit its peak in 2010.

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