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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. 38DN
The given table is showing the information of the amounts of fast food consumed in melbourne. The overall information of the given the comparison of food consumption in the year 2005, present and in the year 2025. The five major types of fast food eaten in melbourne were hambuger, fried chicken, salad, fried rice and noodles. Firstly comparing to the given years, hambuger and fired chicken were the highest consumption among these five foods. Hambugers are highly consumed among all, 40 units in 2005, 38 units in present, 51 units in 2025 meanwhile consumption of fried chicken is 35 units in 2005, 34 units in present, 45 units in 2025. Otherhand, other three food consumption such as salad, fried rice and noodles were in lowest consumption in those years. Among those three salad consumption is very low, only 5 units in the year 2005. later on there is a raise in consumption of 15 units in present and 41 units in 2025, whereas fries rice and noodles consumption has very minimal change with 6 units to 9 units in the period of two decades.
The
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given
table is showing the information of the amounts of
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fast
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food
consumed in
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melbourne
.

The
overall
information of the
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given
the comparison of
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food
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consumption
in the
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year
2005,
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present
and in the
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year
2025.
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The
five major types of
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fast
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food
eaten in
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melbourne
were
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hambuger
,
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fried
chicken, salad,
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fried
rice and noodles.

Firstly
comparing to the
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given
years,
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hambuger
and fired chicken were the highest
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consumption
among these five
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foods
.
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Hambugers
are
highly
consumed among all, 40
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units
in 2005, 38
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units
in
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present
, 51
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units
in 2025 meanwhile
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consumption
of
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fried
chicken is 35
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units
in 2005, 34
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units
in
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present
, 45
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units
in 2025.

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Otherhand
, other three
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food
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consumption
such as salad,
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fried
rice and noodles were in
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lowest
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consumption
in those years. Among those three salad
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consumption
is
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very
low,
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only
5
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units
in the
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year
2005.
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later
on there is a raise in
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consumption
of 15
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units
in
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present
and 41
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units
in 2025, whereas fries rice and noodles
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consumption
has
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very
minimal
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change
with 6
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units
to 9
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units
in the period of two decades.

IELTS academic The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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