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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The given table illustrates the numbers for the average monthly rainfall in 5 cities for a year. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that Cairo is the place where it rains the least, while Hongkong is the rainiest city in this study. If we examine the graph in more detail, it is worth mentioning the biggest number of monthly rainfall could be seen in August in HongKong - 380 mm, while the lowest figures for this month is 27, which is observed in Cairo, where from September to December it does not rain at all. Another interesting aspect is that in HongKong and Tokyo we can witness an upward trend in the amount of monthly rainfall from January to mid-summer and then a downward trend until December. Finally, London is the only city in the table, where the average rainfall remains relatively the same and is hovering between 45 and 80 mm.
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table illustrates the numbers for the average monthly
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in 5 cities for a year.

Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that Cairo is the place where it rains the least, while
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Hongkong
is the rainiest city in this study.

If we examine the graph in more detail, it is worth mentioning the biggest number of monthly
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rainfall
could be
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seen
in August in
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HongKong
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380 mm, while the lowest figures for this month is 27, which
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in Cairo, where from September to December it does not rain at all.

Another interesting aspect is that in
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HongKong
and Tokyo we can witness an upward trend in the amount of monthly
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rainfall
from January to mid-summer and then a downward trend until December.
Finally
, London is the
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city in the table, where the average
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rainfall
remains
relatively
the same and is hovering between 45 and 80 mm.
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IELTS academic The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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