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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. In 1918, the percentage of households in rented accommodation is more as compared in owned accommodation. From 1918, the percentage of households in owned accomodation is going in ascending order. And, the percentage of households in rented accommodation is going in decending order. As the percentage of households in owned accommodation is increasing and rented accommodation is decreasing. But, in 1971 the percentage of households and rented accommodation is equal which is 50%. In 2011 the percentage of households in owned accommodation is more as compared in rented accommodation. From 1981 to 2011 the percentage of households in owned accommodation is increasing in ascending order till 2001. But, in 2011 the percentage of households in owned accommodation is slightly decreasing. From 1981 to 2011 the percentage of household in rented accommodation is decreasing. But, in 2011 rented accommodation is slightly increasing. In conclusion, the percentage of household in owned accomodation is in ascending order whereas, the percentage of household in rented accommodation is in descending order.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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