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The given chart shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The given chart shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. In 1918, the percentage of household in owned accommodation is 24% and the households in rented accommodation percentage is 78% which is very high in comparison to household in owned accommodation. There is 69% of households in rented accommodation where 31% of households in owned accommodation in 1939. In year of 1953 the data of households in owned and rented accommodation remain same as 1939. 59% of households in rented accommodation where 40% of households in owned accommodation covers in 1961. e 1961. The percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation is 50%. In the year of 1981 the percentage of households in owned accomodation is 60% whereas there is only 40% households in rented accomodation. The percentage go higher in 1991 by 68% of owned households accomodation and there is decreasing in percentage of rented households accomodation by 32%. In 2001 we cannot see much difference in accommodation. where rented accommodation cover 31% on the other side owned accommodation households cover 69%. Only one percent difference with the year of 1991. In the year of 2011 there is some decreasing and increasing data as compared to the previous data where the percentage of owned households accommodation is 64% and the percentage of rented households accommodation is 36%.
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IELTS academic The given chart shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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