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The table describes the percentage of worldwide mobile phone sales for different companies in 2005 and 2006.

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The table describes the percentage of worldwide mobile phone sales for different companies in 2005 and 2006. Overall, Nokia, Motorola and Sony Ericsson experienced an increasing number of market share, while Samsung, LG, BenQ Mobile and others received a downturn percentage rise in the year 2005 and 2006. Nokia accounted for 32. 5% in the mobile phone market sales in 2005, the most on the industry, it then rose to 35% in 2006, which had a 2. 5% increase, remained the largest contribution to the market. Motorola shared 17. 7% in the sales, it experienced a 3. 4% growth between 2005 and 2006, became the second most in the market share. Sony Ericsson represents 6. 3% in the sector, it grew slightly by 1. 1% in 2006. Samsung made up of one-eight of market sales in 2005, fell to 11. 8% in 2016. LG experienced a small decreases by 0. 4% between the two years. In 2005, BenQ Mobile and others contributed 4. 9% and 19. 2% respectively, they dropped by 2. 5% and 3% in particular.
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BenQ
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received a downturn percentage rise in the year 2005 and 2006.

Nokia accounted for 32. 5% in the mobile phone
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market
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in 2005, the most on the industry, it then rose to 35% in 2006, which had a 2. 5% increase, remained the largest contribution to the
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market
. Motorola shared 17. 7% in the
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sales
, it experienced a 3. 4% growth between 2005 and 2006, became the second most in the
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share. Sony Ericsson represents 6. 3% in the sector, it grew
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by 1. 1% in 2006.

Samsung made up of one-eight of
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market
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in 2005, fell to 11. 8% in 2016. LG experienced a
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small
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contributed 4. 9% and 19. 2%
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