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3) a glance at the graph provided reveals some striking similarities between the Public and Self-employed sector's employment rates during the period from 2000 to 2010. The public sector began at just under 40 percent, after which it witnessed some fluctuations during 2003 to 2005 around 45 percent, and Then there was a slight upward trend in this sector during the last 5 years to somewhere about 52 percent. The self-employed sector began with minimal growth. Despite a steady fall, it underwent a remarkable increase to 30 percent in 2009 and 2010. the private sector plunged dramatically from approximately 48 percent to 20 percent Over a ten-year period, during which it levelled off at roughly 40 percent for two years between 2002 and 2003.
3) a glance at the graph provided reveals
some
striking similarities between the Public and Self-employed sector's employment rates during the period from 2000 to 2010. The public
sector
began at
just
under 40
percent
, after which it witnessed
some
fluctuations during 2003 to 2005 around 45
percent
, and Then there was a slight upward trend in this
sector
during the last 5 years to somewhere about 52
percent
. The self-employed
sector
began with minimal growth. Despite a steady fall, it underwent a remarkable increase to 30
percent
in 2009 and 2010.
the
private
sector
plunged
dramatically
from approximately 48
percent
to 20
percent
Over a ten-year period, during which it levelled off at roughly 40
percent
for two years between 2002 and 2003.

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