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Bar chart represents the electricity production and consumption

Bar chart represents the electricity production and consumption G936Q
The bar chart illustrates the electricity manufactured and consumed by 10 countries in year 2014. These were measured in billions kwh. In China, the production as well as consumption was the highest one in respective year. Whilst minimum usage was done by Korea. Rep. There was major difference of around 5000 kwh. The producing capacity and used amount in USA. In other countries like Germany, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil and Russia there producing capacity was almost identical, however arranged in ascending order. Whatever, they generated that was utilized by them. Minimum savage of electricity were seen. Overall, utilizing and producing capacity of 10 countries was different in the amount, where as saving pace were almost homogeneous.
The bar chart illustrates the electricity manufactured and consumed by 10 countries in year 2014. These
were measured
in billions
kwh
. In China, the production
as well
as consumption was the highest one in respective year. Whilst minimum usage
was done
by Korea. Rep. There was major difference of around 5000
kwh
. The producing capacity and
used
amount
in USA
.

In other countries like Germany, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil and Russia there producing capacity was almost identical,
however
arranged in ascending order. Whatever, they generated that
was utilized
by them. Minimum savage of electricity were
seen
.
Overall
, utilizing and producing capacity of 10 countries was
different
in the amount,
where as
saving pace were almost homogeneous.
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