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The table demonstrates information about the average of favorite movies by genre According to a survey of 100 women.

The table demonstrates information about the average of favorite movies by genre According to a survey of 100 women. 3xY5l
In general, it can be seen that romantic comedy is the genre that garnered the most votes among women, while most women are not interested in science fiction. Looking at the details, the number-one genre is romantic comedy for women, with 30% of the votes in the poll were given to this genre. Next, Action movies is not nearly as favorite as comedy, with around 25-20 respectively. Thriller and western genres experience the same result, both of which are only 10 % interesting among women. Science fiction are the least popular, with just 5%.
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