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Holiday types by popularity

Holiday types by popularity BMaaV

The line graph witnessed millions of visitors spended their free time with various sorts of holiday spending: beach Trip, skiing on vacation & City breaks from 1990 to 2020. At the beginning of 1990, estimated 4. 5 millions of travellers were interesting to go holiday beach package and moderately declined under 3. 5 end of 2020. Throughout two decades 1990 to 2010, 2. 5 millions of people were going short trip activities and substantially grew reaching about 4 million in 2020. Skiing events started about 2. 5 at the beginning of 1990 and minimally increased in decennium and stood steady almost 3 millions in 2000 to 2010. Afterwards 2010 to 2020, there was a sharp decrease hit a trough of 2 millions. In a nutshell, there was no increase in popularity trend of beach holidays in those 30 years. There was parallel movements of skiing and city breaks from 1990 to 2005, later onwards there was an opposite movement.

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spended
 their free time with various sorts of holiday spending: beach Trip, skiing on vacation & City breaks from 1990 to 2020.

At the beginning of 1990, estimated 4. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 of Possible spelling mistake found.travelers
travellers
 were interesting to go holiday beach package and moderately
 declined under 3. 5 Possible agreement error. The noun 'end' seems to be countable, so consider using: "ends".ends
end
 of 2020.

Throughout two decades 1990 to 2010, 2. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 were going short trip activities and substantially
 grew reaching about 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in 2020.

Skiing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 about 2. 5 at the beginning of 1990 and minimally
 increased in Possible spelling mistake found.decennial
decennium
 and stood steady almost 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 in 2000 to 2010. Afterwards 2010 to 2020, there was a sharp decrease hit a trough of 2 millions.

In a nutshell, there was no increase in popularity trend of beach holidays in those 30 years. Did you mean "There were parallel movements"?There were parallel movements
There was parallel movements
 of skiing and city breaks from 1990 to 2005, later onwards there was an opposite movement. 