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The table data outlines the proportion and number of impoverished families in australia in the year 1999.

The table data outlines the proportion and number of impoverished families in australia in the year 1999. ElVOM

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IELTS academic The table data outlines the proportion and number of impoverished families in australia in the year 1999.

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