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The table compares top ten countries in terms of medals obtained/gained/won in the 2012 Olympic games.

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The table compares top ten countries in terms of medals obtained/gained/won in the 2012 Olympic games. In overall, the USA is reported to have won the greatest number of medals in total while the pattern is reverse for Hungary. As can be seen, with 46 gold, 29 silver and a total of 104 medals the USA is ranked as the leading country followed by China at 38 gold and overall 88 medals. Russia which received overall 82 medals is outranked by Great Britain in terms of gold medals at 24 and 29 respectively. Despite having the same number of gold medals German athletes outperformed those of France regarding silver and bronze medals at 19 and 11 compared to 11 and 12, respectively. In like manner, two other countries on the list, namely, Italy and Hungary showed a similar pattern with the equal number of gold medals. However, again Hungary is ranked lower than its counterpart with smaller number of medals in total. With a total of 35 medals which is higher than those of three other countries Australia completes the top ten list as the ranking is based on the number of gold medals.
The table compares top ten
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countries
in terms of
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medals
obtained/gained/won in the 2012
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Olympic games
.

In
overall
, the USA
is reported
to have won the greatest
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number
of
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medals
in total while the pattern is reverse for Hungary.

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seen
, with 46 gold, 29 silver and a total of 104
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medals
the USA
is ranked
as the leading
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country
followed by China at 38 gold and
overall
88
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medals
. Russia which received
overall
82
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medals
is outranked
by Great Britain in terms of gold
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medals
at 24 and 29
respectively
.

Despite having the same
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number
of gold
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medals
German athletes outperformed those of France regarding silver and bronze
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medals
at 19 and 11
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compared
to 11 and 12,
respectively
. In like manner, two other
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countries
on the list,
namely
, Italy and Hungary
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showed
a similar pattern with the equal
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number
of gold
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medals
.
However
, again Hungary
is ranked
lower than its counterpart with smaller
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number
of
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medals
in total.

With a total of 35
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medals
which is higher than those of three other
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countries
Australia completes the top ten list as the ranking
is based
on the
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number
of gold
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medals
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IELTS academic The table compares top ten countries in terms of medals obtained/gained/won in the 2012 Olympic games.

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