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The table compares the underground lines for trains in six cities in terms of length, date opened, and the numbers of passengers in a year Overall, all underground railways systems established in separate years from 19th century to 21th century.

The table compares the underground lines for trains in six cities in terms of length, date opened, and the numbers of passengers in a year Overall, all underground railways systems established in separate years from 19th century to 21th century. And, these systems in London Paris and Tokyo seem to be longer and more crowded than three cities left – Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles. To begin with, Tokyo underground railway systems opened in 1927 is the most crowded with 1927 million people using in a year. Followed by Paris underground railway systems, which is established in 1900, have 1191 million passengers per year, while the oldest system, London underground, are used by 775 million people. Besides, 394 kilometres of the route in London is rather longer than 155 kilometres of the Tokyo’s route and 199 kilometres of the Paris’ route. On the other hand, the Washington DC underground railways system, opened in 1976, has 126 kilometres of route. This route is much longer than two routes in Kyoto and Los Angeles which are 11 kilometres and 28 kilometres respectively. In addition, the Los Angeles underground opened in 2001 has the total of passengers is 50 million per year and the Kyoto underground opened in 1981 has just 45 million passengers, compare to the Washington DC underground has 144 million people using in a year.
The table compares the
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lines for trains in six cities in terms of length, date opened, and the numbers of
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passengers
in a year

Overall
, all
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established in separate years from 19th century to 21th century. And, these
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in London Paris and Tokyo seem to be longer and more crowded than three cities
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– Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.

To
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with, Tokyo
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opened in 1927 is the most crowded with 1927
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using in a
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. Followed by Paris
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, which
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in 1900, have 1191
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, while the oldest
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, London
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by 775
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longer than 155 kilometres of the Tokyo’s
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and 199 kilometres of the Paris’ route.

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, the Washington DC
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, opened in 1976, has 126 kilometres of
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. This
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is much longer than two
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in Kyoto and Los Angeles which are 11 kilometres and 28 kilometres
respectively
.
In addition
, the Los Angeles
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opened in 2001 has the total of
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is 50
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and the Kyoto
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opened in 1981 has
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45
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, compare to the Washington DC
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has 144
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using in a
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IELTS academic The table compares the underground lines for trains in six cities in terms of length, date opened, and the numbers of passengers in a year Overall, all underground railways systems established in separate years from 19th century to 21th century.

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