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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The diagram represents the actual information and design of a wave-energy machine and there places where it is installed. Overall, the airflow which passes from the turbine present in electricity generator will give a moment to a turbine to rotate and the wave energy outputs which are placed in(high and lost cost installments respectively). In terms, of a wave-energy machine the turbines which are rotating with the airflow passing through it and the water level which is increasing by the wave direction, and the chambers of generator which have in flow and out flow of air through those chambers. with the downward pressure of air flow and with upward pressure of water levels the generator is working. The places of installations of large wave and short wave is located on the ground where it has slope and with the waves hitting both the waves producing electricity. The small wave produdes the least output where large produce high output.

The diagram represents the actual information and design of a wave-energy machine and there places where it is installed
.

Overall
, the airflow which passes from the turbine present in electricity generator will give a moment to a turbine to rotate and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrushstreamswellupsurgerashsurge
wave
 energy outputs which are placed
 in(high and lost cost installments respectively
).

In terms, of a wave-energy machine the turbines which are rotating with the airflow passing through it and the water level which is increasing by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrushstreamswellupsurgerashsurge
wave
 direction, and the chambers of generator which have in flow and out flow of air through those chambers. with the downward pressure of air flow and with upward pressure of water levels the generator is working.

The places of installations of large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrushstreamswellupsurgerashsurge
wave
 and short You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrushstreamswellupsurgerashsurge
wave
is located
 on the ground where it has slope and with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrushstreamswellupsurgerashsurge
waves
 hitting both the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrushstreamswellupsurgerashsurge
waves
 producing electricity. The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
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wave
 produdes the least output where large produce high output. 

IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic

American English

4 paragraphs

158 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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