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The bar chart provides information about how many visitors who came to art galleries in six different countries in 2011

The bar chart provides information about how many visitors who came to art galleries in six different countries in 2011 r8bql

The bar chart shows how many people visited art galleries in 6 countries around the world in 2011. In general, the data can be divided into 2 groups: one with rather high number of visitors includes museums of France, the USA and the UK while the other contains countries which have modest statistics. As can be clearly seen from the chart, the people visiting Louvre museum made up the vast majority of visitors with just under 9 millions. The second most destination was Metropolitan in America with 6 million and it was followed closely by British Museum in the UK. On the other hand, those numbers of Korea, Spain and Russia were quite humble. Far fewer people, roughly 1/3 the counts of France, came to visit National Museum of Korea. Similarly, Museo del Prado Museum in Spain had even smaller number of tourists with 3 million and the least popular place was State Hermitage Museum in Russia with slightly below 3 million.

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