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What do you think are the effects of natural disasters on human life and properties as a whole what should be government or people do to cope with this in a better way in your views

What do you think are the effects of natural disasters on human life and properties as a whole what should be government or people do to cope with this in a better way in your views 5kBre
Natural calamities are unpredictable they can occur in any time in anywhere due to natural calamities a lot of people lose their lives as well as birds and animals natural disasters like 8 week floods tornado and so on natural calamities cannot be prevented by their effects can be reduced there are several methods to tackle with these problems which are cash by mishaps effects can effects and solution in the upcoming paragraphs there are several effects behind its first and foremost by a spring of natural disaster disaster was a lot of a lot of people and birds are lost their lives to apotome in the last time flood flood occured in Nepal due to the heavy rainfall and river river and lakes are totally filled with water and that time a lot of buildings got some some rust in weather also due to these number of people was lost their lives their phone number of humans other flora and fauna are lost their lives due to the natural calamities for the more these are several ways to mitigate these problems government can do better work with the cooperation of individuals by donating money e12 victim of the area where natural disasters have a can't decide this government should provide emergency in in our country because medical medical facilities are very necessary for the individuals finally government should I wear to the people social media regarding natural calamities and buildings should made by made by strong material also people should made disaster proof buildings Hans natural disasters may occur then people cannot lose their lives also properties in conclusion both government and people can solve their problems by working together
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as well
as birds and animals
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natural
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disasters
like
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and foremost by a spring of
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natural
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disaster
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disaster
was a
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lot
of a
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for the more these are several ways to mitigate these
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government
can do better work with the cooperation of individuals by donating money e12 victim of the area where
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natural
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should provide emergency
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and buildings should
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proof buildings Hans
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natural
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people
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also
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in conclusion
both
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people
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IELTS academic What do you think are the effects of natural disasters on human life and properties as a whole what should be government or people do to cope with this in a better way in your views

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