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The table compares the figures for international traveller

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The table compares the figures for international travellers in different regions in the years 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. It is clear that the total number of people who went abroad increased during the period of the time. In addition, Europe had the highest number of foreign tourists among the five areas. In 1990, over 280 million people made a trip to Europe followed by the figures for America and Asia and pacific with roughly 80 and 60 million respectively. Meanwhile, both Africa and Middle East seemed less appealing for tourists to visit, which was just under 20 million. The given data from the chart showed that Europe was still the first-priority choice for travellers with a significant rise to 390 million, and then there was a slight growth of 3 million before reaching the peak of 400 million in 2005. By contrast, though a moderate increase to nearly 11 million was seen in Middle East, it still had the least number of people travelling abroad with 15, 8 million over a period of 15 years. Africa, America and Asia and the pacific experienced a similar increasing trend of international tourists from the 1990 year towards, which reached approximately 29, 113 and 135 million respectively in 2005.
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over a period of 15 years. Africa, America and Asia and the pacific experienced a similar increasing trend of international tourists from the 1990 year towards, which reached approximately 29, 113 and 135
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