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The table illustrates the information about worldwide tourism in nine different countries during a 1-year period starting from 2009 and ending in 2010. Overall, it can be seen that Germany gained significant popularity in the tourism business by the end of the given period and contains a large number of international tourists, China and Turkey followed that trend. Almost all countries followed an upward trend, except for Hong Kong which followed a reverse course. Looking to a more detailed analysis, Germany witnessed a dramatic surge of tourists in two years as the number grew from 10 to 24, with the highest proportion of change of 109 and considered to be the most attractive among other countries. By following this trend, Turkey and Italy showed considerable changes in the terms of the tourism sector. China went up from 22 to 34, expressing 55% change, while Turkey's index of change was 22% lower. Turkey surged from 32 in 2009 to 46 in 2010 and experienced a 33%. The changes in the UK's tourism field were unnoticeable, making up only 3. 6%. However, the weakest points can be observed in the rest countries (USA, Spain, Italy, Hong Kong) which showed insignificant changes and recorded a growth of 1. 5, 1. 8, 2. 3, -11 respectively. All of them expressed a little development by 1% from 2009 to 2010. It is interestingly noted that France remained unchanged and showed no chops in 1 year.

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