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manufacturing process of sugar. explain and summarize main features

manufacturing process of sugar. explain and summarize main features alkD7

The chart here illustrates the process of manufacturing sugar from a plant known as sugar cane. The process involves seven major steps from beginning to the end. Firstly, sugar canes are planted and growed for about 12 to 18 months. Initially the land is ploughed and prepared for sowing and then the rudimentary plants are looked after by farmers to prevent any potential parasite atack, until they are fully matured for harvesting. Subsequently, the second step involves harvesting, which can be automated using fancy manchinary or can be achieved by using human labour. Both of these techniques seems to serve the purpose pretty well but the manufactures have to analyze which method is more efficient and cost-effective. In the third stage canes are subjected to crushing, in a heavy equipment, in order to extract the juice. During the fourth phase, juice is filtered through limestone for purification. The clean and clear juice is then boiled in an evaporator as this fifth stage in the cycle is meant to convert juice into syrup. In the following step, syrup is centrifuged. This leads to the separation of sugar crystals from the suspension (syrup). Finally, these crystals of sugar are dried and cooled in a container. The sugar is now ready to be supplied!

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juice
. During the fourth phase, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
is filtered
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clear
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juice
 is then boiled in an evaporator as this fifth stage in the cycle is meant
 to convert You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 into syrup. In the following step, syrup is centrifuged
. This leads to the separation of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 crystals from the suspension (syrup). Finally
, these crystals of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
are dried
 and cooled in a container. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
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now
 ready to be supplied
! 