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The chart provides information about the urban population, rural population, and total population between 1950 and 2030.

The chart provides information about the urban population, rural population, and total population between 1950 and 2030. PQ7K
The chart provides information about the urban population, rural population, and total population between 1950 and 2030. In general, what stands out from the graph is that there were considerable upward trends in the rural and urban populations. Furthermore, over the period of 80 years, urban growth is rising even higher than the rural population. Another interesting point is that the number of the rural population dropped from 2005 and with prediction to 2030. In the beginning, the world population was 2. 6 billion. Withal, the number for the urban population at the start of the time stood at 1. 8 billion, with a rural population of 0. 8 billion. The number of the two patterns increased by 1, 2 billion after 35 years. Furthermore, there was the same indication on both rural and urban population in 2010, which the population is 3. 3 billion. Nowadays, the population all over the world has reached the amount of 7. 5 billion. In the future, there is a prognosis that the total population will achieve 8. 2 billion. Moreover, predicted that the urban population will be higher than the rural population by 2030.
The chart provides information about the
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,
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rural
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population
, and total
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between 1950 and 2030.

In general
, what stands out from the graph is that there were considerable upward trends in the
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rural
and
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urban
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populations
.
Furthermore
, over the period of 80 years,
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urban
growth is rising even higher than the
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rural
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population
. Another interesting point is that the number of the
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rural
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population
dropped from 2005 and with prediction to 2030.

In the beginning, the world
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population
was 2. 6
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billion
. Withal, the number for the
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urban
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population
at the
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of the time stood at 1. 8
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billion
, with a
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population
of 0. 8
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billion
. The number of the two patterns increased by 1, 2
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billion
after 35 years.
Furthermore
, there was the same indication on both
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rural
and
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urban
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population
in 2010, which the
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population
is 3. 3 billion.

Nowadays, the
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population
all over the world has reached the amount of 7. 5
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billion
. In the future, there is a prognosis that the total
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population
will achieve 8. 2
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billion
.
Moreover
, predicted that the
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urban
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population
will be higher than the
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rural
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by 2030.
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