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Two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

Two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. QY73
The two maps show the main changes on the island before and after introduction of some tourist facilities. In general, it appears that the island became more modernized by introducing road communication and housing estates primarily on its western part. One interesting change is that footpaths and vehicle were constructed to get access to western and southern part of the island. It is interesting to note that before construction, the island hadn’t had any facilities for tourists, but after than a great number of accommodation was built. Another striking point is that restaurant and reception were erected, which gave tourists an improved access to eat out and book a ticket to one of the activities on the island. In terms of activities swimming area and a plier were introduced, getting connected with each other by footpath and vehicle track so that tourists may chose different way to reach the place. A final interesting development was an introduction of sailing ships as a part of activities.
The two maps
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island
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before
and after introduction of
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some
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tourist
facilities.

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, it appears that the
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island
became more modernized by introducing road communication and housing estates
primarily
on its western part.

One interesting
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is that footpaths and vehicle
were constructed
to
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get
access to western and southern part of the
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island
. It is interesting to note that
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before
construction, the
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island
hadn’t had any facilities for
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tourists
,
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but
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after
than a great number of accommodation
was built
. Another striking point is that restaurant and reception
were erected
, which gave
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tourists
an
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improved
access to eat out and book a ticket to one of the activities on the island.

In terms of activities swimming area and a
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plier
were introduced
, getting connected with each other by footpath and vehicle
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track
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so
that
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tourists
may chose
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way to reach the place. A final interesting development was an introduction of sailing ships as a part of activities.

IELTS academic Two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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