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The line graph below shows how many students went to university in the USA from three countries in Europe from 1992 to 2017.

The line graph below shows how many students went to university in the USA from three countries in Europe from 1992 to 2017. bxQYX

The given line graph provides data on the number of undergraduates in America from three Europe nations including Germany, Greece and Italy over a period of 25 years between 1992 and 2017. Overall, the number of university students from three countries decreased except for Italy, where there were a dramatically jump in student arrivals. It can be seen that, in 1992, the number of learners who went to the USA from Germany stood at 600, 000 students. The figure then decreased sharply to 300, 000 in 2002, and then continued to fell steadily to approximately 200, 000 undergraduates in 2007. Likewise, Greek student number also went down. Beginning at 400, 000, the figure fluctuated slightly before reaching a peak of about 450, 000 students in 2007. From then onwards, it dropped significantly by 300, 000 in 2013. After that, the figure remained stable at around 150, 000 until the end of the period. On the contrary, the number of university undergraduates from Korea increased dramatically from 200, 000 to about 650, 000. This number then leveled off at 650, 000 in 2017.

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