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Households owned and rented accommodation in england and wales between 1918 and 2011

Households owned and rented accommodation in england and wales between 1918 and 2011 BwYMw
The given bar chart depicts information about an households owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales during a period of 1918 to 2011. Overall. from this given bar chart it can be clearly understood during a initial period in 1918 the ratio of rented households bar sketch was in upward direction. On the other hand owning a house hold was almost 70% lower than rental accommodation. But this chart ratio was fluctuating between those years, a notable exception was owning and rented accommodation bar sketch was same percentage in 1971. Since then there was a gradual raise in owning rather than rented accommodation, . Finally at 2011 the chart of owning households reached up to 65% as highest compared to all the years simultaneously rented percentage went down to 35%. In conclusion, the ration of rented accommodation was sharply during initial period and later renter accommodation ratio was going down, by the time owning accommodation percentage was coming up and its percentage was higher than other.
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in England and Wales during a period of 1918 to 2011.

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initial period in 1918 the ratio of rented households bar sketch was in upward direction.
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hold was almost 70% lower than rental accommodation.

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ratio was fluctuating between those years, a notable exception was
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owning
and rented
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accommodation
bar sketch was same
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percentage
in 1971. Since then there was a gradual raise in
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owning
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accommodation
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Finally
at 2011 the
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of
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households reached up to 65% as highest compared to all the years
simultaneously
rented
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percentage
went down to 35%.

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, the ration of rented
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accommodation
was
sharply
during initial period and later renter
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accommodation
ratio was going down, by the time
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owning
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accommodation
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percentage
was coming up and its
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was higher than other.
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IELTS academic Households owned and rented accommodation in england and wales between 1918 and 2011

Academic
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4 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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