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The table chat show information about numer of meals consumed in local restaurant

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It is clearly vivid that maximum meal consume in dinner during whole week and in breakfast least meal consumedin all 7 days. To begin with, breakfast meals consumed in week days is quit similar. In Monday and Tuesday 25 meals consumed in both days and number of meal consumed are similar. In Wednesday there are difference only one meal 27 meals consumed on Wednesday and 28 meals consumed on Thursday
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consume in dinner during whole week and in breakfast
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least
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consumedin
all 7 days.

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with, breakfast
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in week days
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similar. In Monday and Tuesday 25
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meals
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consumed
in both days and number of
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meal
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are similar. In Wednesday there are difference
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meal
27
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consumed
on Wednesday and 28
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on
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Thursday
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IELTS academic The table chat show information about numer of meals consumed in local restaurant

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
69 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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