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The charts show the data of marriage and divorce, also, the marital status of Americans in 1970 to 2000.

The charts show the data of marriage and divorce, also, the marital status of Americans in 1970 to 2000. lRLeW
A glance at the first bar chart reveals information about changes in the number of marriages and divorces in the USA. The second bar graph illustrates the proportion of marital status in the United States over a period of 120 years, beginning in 1970 and finishing in 2000. In general, what stands out from the first graph is that, although the number of marriages declined significantly, the divorce rate remained same over the spam. Whereas, the married adults projected the highest in 1970, however, single matures stands out at the highest in the year 2000. As can be seen from the first figure, the marriages remained stable at 2. 5 million between 1970 and 1980, reached at approximately 2. 3 million in 1990 and hits the lowest point of 1 million in the year 2000. On the contrary,
A glance at the
first
bar chart reveals information about
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in the number of marriages and divorces in the USA. The second bar graph illustrates the proportion of marital status in the United States over a period of 120 years, beginning in 1970 and finishing in 2000.

In general
, what stands out from the
first
graph is that, although the number of marriages declined
significantly
, the divorce rate remained same over the spam. Whereas, the married adults projected the highest in 1970,
however
, single matures stands out at the highest in the year 2000.

As can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
from the
first
figure, the marriages remained stable at 2. 5 million between 1970 and 1980, reached at approximately 2. 3 million in 1990 and hits the lowest point of 1 million in the year 2000.
On the contrary
,
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IELTS academic The charts show the data of marriage and divorce, also, the marital status of Americans in 1970 to 2000.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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