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The chart gives us information about the different types of media usage from 1990 to 2005.

The chart gives us information about the different types of media usage from 1990 to 2005. PERrB
The chart gives us information about the different types of media usage from 1990 to 2005. The vertical axis represents the number of hours and the horizontal axis represents the years. Overall, the chart indicates that in 1990 Television usage was the highest and Internet usage was the lowest or zero, and Radio and Printed Material usage were between 3 to 7. In 1995, Television was still the highest and maintaining the number of hours, whereas, Internet gain few hours and Radio had a small incline and decline in between and Printed Material have started to decline. In 2000, there are many fluctuations in all, Television and Printed Material have fallen sharply, and Internet condition and stats are better than 1995 and Radio have small incline than before. In 2005, again there are some big changes, Television had lost 5 hours to 17 average hours and the Internet gained 11 hours to 14 average hours and Radio gained 1 hour and Printed material had lost 1 hour. In brief, In 15years, Television suffered a huge loss of 8 average hours and the Internet gained a huge benefit of 14 average hours and Radio had gained only 1 average hour, and Printed material suffered a small loss of 3 average hours.
The chart gives us information about the
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different
types of media
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usage
from 1990 to 2005. The vertical axis represents the number of
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hours
and the horizontal axis represents the years.

Overall
, the chart indicates that in 1990
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Television
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usage
was the highest and Internet
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usage
was the lowest or zero, and
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Radio
and
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Printed
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Material
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usage
were
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between 3 to 7
. In 1995,
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Television
was
still
the highest and maintaining the number of
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hours
, whereas, Internet gain few
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hours
and
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Radio
had a
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small
incline and decline in between and
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Printed
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Material
have
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started
to decline. In 2000, there are
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many
fluctuations in all,
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Television
and
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Printed
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Material
have fallen
sharply
, and Internet condition and stats are better than 1995 and
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Radio
have
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small
incline than
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before
.
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In
2005, again there are
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some
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big
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changes
,
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Television
had lost 5
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hours
to 17
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average
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hours
and the Internet
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gained
11
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hours
to 14
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average
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hours
and
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Radio
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gained
1
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hour
and
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Printed
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material
had lost 1 hour.

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In
brief, In 15years,
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Television
suffered a huge loss of 8
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average
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hours
and the Internet
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gained
a huge benefit of 14
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average
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hours
and
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Radio
had
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gained
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only
1
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average
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hour
, and
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Printed
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material
suffered a
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small
loss of 3
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average
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hours
.

IELTS academic The chart gives us information about the different types of media usage from 1990 to 2005.

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